Just a few days ago, our group presented our
proposal to rest of the class of ES2007s. Looking back, my group mates and I
have really dedicated a great deal of time and effort into refining the
proposal to the best of our abilities, and the same goes for the oral
presentation!
Week 11 was a week when all four of us were
swamped with endless term papers due,other tests and presentations for other
modules, but our wanted very much to do justice to our proposal through our
presentation, and we made time for it nonetheless and started preparing for it as
early as possible. As we did not have time for much face-to-face meeting to
prepare the slides together, we divided the workload according to the parts
which we would be presenting. The good thing was we saved time (we got a lot of
things covered in the shortest amount of time possible) but then we might have
compromised on making our personal styles of presentation fit more snugly
together as a group. Upon hindsight, I thought we could really improve on that,
if we took more effort to take the time out to comment on one another’s
mistakes and flaws during our practice sessions. Although I believed that our
slides sufficiently aided us in bringing our ideas across, it could have been
better if it had a more professional finish and if our styles of presentation blended
in more seamlessly, as this was, ultimately, a group effort.
On a positive note, preparation was done more
thoroughly for the implementation of the content itself, bringing across to the
audience our cause for this proposal. Our proposed solutions for the NUS
Internal Shuttle Buses(ISB) services, as well as at busstops will serve to
benefit everyone of us in the class, in fact the whole student and staff
population, if they are implemented. Thus, we aimed at making the audience
internalize the real situation at hand, and pause to analyze if they, indeed
feel the same way as we do. In my opinion, I feel that we have achieved that to
a certain extent!
With regards to personal delivery during the
presentation, I have to admit that I did feel the jitters right before it was
my turn to present. It was most nerve wrecking few seconds -as I heard the last
two sentences of the presenter before me float past my ears, and before I knew
it, I was up. It was the 5 minutes which will make or break it. Despite knowing
the proposal inside out, I was still not as fluent as I thought I would be. Sometimes
I wonder if even with many more hours of practice, the same mistakes will
corrected. I have come to reaslise that it is proabably better to prepare for
the worst situations and keep calm at all times. It is our anxiety, which
brings us down.
To end off looking on the brighter side, I believe
that I was energetic and enthusiastic while presenting my part, because I
believed very strongly in our proposal and was set to convince the rest of the
class of the viability of our proposal as well! Also, keeping up the level of
energy and audience interaction was important in keeping up with their short
attention span. This 20%-worthy-5-minute-presentation has
definitely taught me that I must first convince myself that I am prepared to
persuade others of my ideas, before I set out to do so.
Hi Xue Hui,
ReplyDeleteWow, I thought you really improved since the last presentation! You were confident and your cut out on a lot of fillers, like “right”. You have a very nice voice ( perhaps you can consider doing radio) and good voice projection. You didn’t stumble on your words, which shows a high level of preparedness!
One area you could improve upon is using your hand gestures more appropriately. Hand gestures can help make your presentation more engaging and it would complement your presentation style. The main concern from your first presentation is your “apologetic demeanour “ and I felt that you have addressed that quite well .
Jitters come to everyone. Take them in your stride.
Cheers!